Second render of this one… I forgot to switch the sky back on again [un-hide]… its becoming a habit… 12 hours of rendering and nothing but blackness up above… doh…
Second render of this one… I forgot to switch the sky back on again [un-hide]… its becoming a habit… 12 hours of rendering and nothing but blackness up above… doh…
Changed the first shot thinking about what Ed Hooks says about action in pursuit of an objective overcoming an obstacle, a little more more lighting alteration too…
The first two shots spliced together… the rhythm of the first shot has changed with more anticipation built in; firstly a pause after the Zees and then after thinking of the carrot but before remembering that he had just seen a carrot machine… more later…
Just a little more… The up snap on the head and hand after the jump is too fast… and I think the hand on the glass should slide down as he peers in looking at the carrots…
Well the jumps OK but if don’t forget to un-hide the sky I forget that light for one shot may not be cool for another… I say again Doh…